HOMEWORK

Grade:B/C
Good Points:
the green screen background works well with the original band style and it includes the band name whch is a nice touch altohugh not really necessary
The lipsynching is good, it is fairly accurate in most places
The carousel shots are good and fit with the upbeat nature of the song
We likke their referencing to the numbers and letters in the song

Areas needing improvement:
The singer lacks enthusiam and seems to be suffering from mild stage fright or bordem. The song is quite upbeat and needs stronger performance.
Slightly repetative with random unrelated shots and narrative
The editing of cuts is quite weak and lacks interest and speed needed for the song.